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That girl who always smiles
Cheerful and nice, always
That girl who always smiles
And tries her best to help you
That girl who always smiles
That laughs on rainy days
That girl who always smiles
Who listens to what you have to say
That girl who always smiles
Smiling until you look away
Cheerful and nice, always
That girl who always smiles
And tries her best to help you
That girl who always smiles
That laughs on rainy days
That girl who always smiles
Who listens to what you have to say
That girl who always smiles
Smiling until you look away
Literature
The Girl Who Was Afraid To Be
She speaks to me fondly
of passions and talents,
of guitars and stars,
with such breathless intensity
then stops short and
apologises
for speaking at all.
All because somewhere in her life,
someone she loved broke her heart
by ignoring
her beautiful words
and telling her to
shut up,
keep it down,
nobody cares.
People aren’t born sad.
We make them that way.
Literature
stardust. (you're beautiful)
he's
out of orbit -
interstellar space
dust in his
veins rise and
fall with
each word that
drips and pools
beneath his
honeyed tongue;
silence
is between
his knuckle-bones,
sharp and
defined like the
ribcage of a
baby bird, his
mazarine eyes
were not made for
this earth but
for the stars.
and
some days he
fades in and
out of reality like
he never really
wanted to be there
at all.
on those days
i just think
my god, you really don't
realise how amazing you are.
Literature
Wait.
when each raising
of your coffee cup
takes both hands
and a strong gut
it’s awfully hard to
keep drinking
but there are
other, better days
when happy things
come easy as rain
smiles race
down window panes
and puddles of kept promises
kiss and play at my feet
and my hair is still
damp from those days
and I’ve learned
the patience necessary
to just wait.
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I was heading to the bus after school and a certain event inspired this poem /D
Do not use, copy, repost, claim as your own, etc. All writing is mine, for my own personal use and nothing else
Do not use, copy, repost, claim as your own, etc. All writing is mine, for my own personal use and nothing else
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Its really weird because this is literally me and none of my friends have figured it out yet-
But otherwise, I think this poem was well delivered and I actually thought it was beautiful especially as if I believed it was talking to me and no one else
Honestly this is a kind of poem that I'd love to read over and over-
I want to leave this here to tell you that you have talent in both writing and drawing and that this really left an impression on me
I feel like this could be an imprint on my life, no joke
I might send my friends a link to this one day and probably tell them that that's me in the situation
Honestly I was not disappointed from taking my time and spending it reading and typing this response to it